This is Michael. Great job. Changes are made in ´´quotes.´´
Panel 2: The warm up ´´prepares´´ the body...
Panel 3: Either: Warming up ´´improves´´ the results... or Warming up ´´can´´ improve the results... Slide 5: Joint Mobility, not Joint Movility
Slide 6: We move the legs forwards and backwards for some ´´time´´ and then... We rotate the hips won ´´way,´´ and ´´then´´ the other way.
Slide 9: Don´t understand the sentence.
Slide 12: ...the warm up ´´consists´´ in moving the body and ´´activating´´ all the human...
Slide 13: one person ´´is on´´ the middle line... ...everybody ´´has to run... ...the person ´´in´´ the middle ´´touches´´ somebody... ´´I declare war on´´ Slide 14: What do you mean by a person do (change to does) a circuit? What do you mean by circuit?
You need to work on your game descriptions again. Be careful with grammar mistakes. Try running you´re text in Microsoft Word or another processing program set to English before you post it.
This is Michael. Great job. Changes are made in ´´quotes.´´
ResponderEliminarPanel 2:
The warm up ´´prepares´´ the body...
Panel 3:
Either:
Warming up ´´improves´´ the results...
or
Warming up ´´can´´ improve the results...
Slide 5:
Joint Mobility, not Joint Movility
Slide 6:
We move the legs forwards and backwards for some ´´time´´ and then...
We rotate the hips won ´´way,´´ and ´´then´´ the other way.
Slide 9:
Don´t understand the sentence.
Slide 12:
...the warm up ´´consists´´ in moving the body and ´´activating´´ all the human...
Slide 13:
one person ´´is on´´ the middle line...
...everybody ´´has to run...
...the person ´´in´´ the middle ´´touches´´ somebody...
´´I declare war on´´
Slide 14:
What do you mean by a person do (change to does) a circuit? What do you mean by circuit?
You need to work on your game descriptions again. Be careful with grammar mistakes. Try running you´re text in Microsoft Word or another processing program set to English before you post it.